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Eleventh in the Line

Ten brides have already been refused. She walks up the cursed prince's hill carrying her own bride list. At the kennel gate she crosses out her own name.

Teodora Vask is the eleventh-in-line princess of a small mountain kingdom that pays its tribute in marriages. The cursed prince of Aurelin has refused ten brides in two years. On the third morning of spring Teodora delivers herself up the long hill carrying her own bride list, signs it at the gate to be polite, and then takes one look at the kennel master at the side door and asks him, instead, if he would prefer her.

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Teodora Vask is the eleventh-in-line princess of a small mountain kingdom that pays its tribute in marriages. The cursed prince of Aurelin has refused ten brides in two years. On the third morning of spring Teodora delivers herself up the long hill carrying her own bride list, signs it at the gate to be polite, and then takes one look at the kennel master at the side door and asks him, instead, if he would prefer her.

Chapter 1

The Side Gate

The sun is a pale, watery coin over the serrated peaks of Aurelin, catching the dew on the side gate’s rusted latch. Teodora Vask does not wait for the guard to find his tongue; she simply holds out the heavy vellum bride-list, her ink-pot balanced precariously on the stone lip of the pump. With a flick of her wrist, she draws a sharp, dark line through her own name. Beneath it, in a hand steady enough to shame a court scribe, she writes Refused.

'Give that to the Prince’s steward,' she says, her voice as crisp as the spring air. She ignores the guard’s slack-jawed stare, her fingers brushing the dog-eared receipt book at her belt for comfort. The silk of her buttercream gown drags through the damp straw of the yard, a ruinous waste of Karavest’s finest weaving. She does not care. She has spent twenty-two years as an afterthought, and she will not be the eleventh woman to wait for a cursed man’s nod. 'I am not here for a crown. Tell me, where is the kennel master?'

The guard points a trembling finger toward the low stone archway. A sharp whistle pierces the morning quiet, followed by the rhythmic thud of a tail against wood. The heavy iron gate to the kennels begins to swing outward, revealing the man leaning against the post.

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A story of wry·sunlit·tender·subversive

Genre
High Fantasy Romance
Heat
Medium
Read pace
About 1 min per chapter
Status
Complete story · 48 chapters · about 60 minutes

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