The Stranger at the Funeral — opening scene

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The Stranger at the Funeral

She counsels widows for a living. She has been one for nine days and a stranger at the graveside knew her husband's other name.

Margot is a grief counsellor in Portland whose husband died in a single-car crash on the coast highway. At the wake, a woman she has never met asks, gently, whether Margot knew about the other family. By the time the casseroles are gone, she has two phone numbers, an address in Salem, and a son she did not know existed.

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What it's about

Margot is a grief counsellor in Portland whose husband died in a single-car crash on the coast highway. At the wake, a woman she has never met asks, gently, whether Margot knew about the other family. By the time the casseroles are gone, she has two phone numbers, an address in Salem, and a son she did not know existed.

Chapter 1

The Casserole Line

The Pyrex dish is heavy, lukewarm, and smells faintly of industrial cheddar. Margot sets it among the half-empty platters on the sideboard with the practiced precision of a woman who knows exactly how much space a tragedy should occupy. Outside the living room windows, the Portland rain turns the twilight into a smear of charcoal and grey, blurring the silhouettes of the final few mourners.

She is smoothing her wool skirt when the woman appears. This stranger is younger—mid-thirties—wearing a tan trench coat that lacks its third brass button. She does not reach for the coffee. Instead, she watches Margot with a terrifying, soft-eyed sympathy that makes the pearls at Margot's throat feel like a choke-chain. Margot waits for the standard condolences, the professional shield already raised, but the woman leans in closer than a stranger should.

"I’m sorry, Margot," the woman says, her voice barely a notch above the rain. "But did you know about the other family? In Salem?" The air in the room suddenly feels thin, like a vacuum has been pulled. Margot’s grey eyes lock onto the stranger’s face, searching for a crack in the cruelty. Joanne’s hand slides into the pocket of her damp trench coat and begins to withdraw a small, rectangular piece of cardstock.

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The details

A story of hushed·coastal·grieving·tense

Genre
Domestic Suspense
Heat
Low
Read pace
About 1 min per chapter
Status
Complete story · 48 chapters · about 60 minutes

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