Of Comets and Kings — opening scene

A Storykix Original

Of Comets and Kings

The sky said the prince she tutored would burn her tower. She read the chart twice. Then she proposed.

Liriel Aster is the chief astronomer of a tower that has stood three hundred years. She has tutored Prince Caer Vael in star-craft since he was twelve. On the eve of his coronation she reads in a slow comet's tail the night her tower will burn at his order, and walks the long stair down to offer him the only future her instruments have not yet seen.

Start Reading Preview chapter one

What it's about

Liriel Aster is the chief astronomer of a tower that has stood three hundred years. She has tutored Prince Caer Vael in star-craft since he was twelve. On the eve of his coronation she reads in a slow comet's tail the night her tower will burn at his order, and walks the long stair down to offer him the only future her instruments have not yet seen.

Chapter 1

The Red Shift

The primary lens of the Mirrorglass Tower drinks the light of a dead sky. At three in the morning, the air at the apex is a whetted blade, smelling of mountain snow and the bitter residue of pitch-pine ink. Liriel Aster stands alone, her midnight-blue coat buttoned against the draft, her pale-grey eyes fixed to the eyepiece as the comet drags its jagged tail across the meridian.

She adjusts the brass gears with a steady, ink-smudged hand. The mathematics of the heavens rarely lie, yet the trajectory she maps across the vellum is an impossibility of fire and ash. For sixteen years, she has taught Prince Caer Vael that stars are silent witnesses, but this celestial guest screams of a singular end: the tower she serves will burn by the hand of the king she tutored.

Liriel reaches for her ephemeris, her fingers tracing the soft, worn spine of the book in her pocket. The prophecy is etched in the curve of the comet's path, a geometric certainty that demands a radical response before the sun dares to rise. The ink on her final calculation begins to bleed, mirroring a sudden red shift in the observatory's primary lens.

End of chapter one

Continue to Chapter 2

Free to start. About 1 minute per chapter.

The details

A story of nocturnal·regal·precise·smouldering

Genre
High Fantasy Romance
Heat
Medium
Read pace
About 1 min per chapter
Status
Complete story · 48 chapters · about 60 minutes

Fiction you can fall into.

Browse all stories

Storykix is on iPhone.

Read anywhere. Download the app.

Get the app

Keep reading

The whole story is waiting. Start from the first.

Start Reading